Monday, September 04, 2006

A Place for me


Solitude

Drifting, silence, raw.
Time now beckons, dance sharp, turn
clouds, fluffy pillows.


Conflicting spirits
Cannot see my soft steps smile
Dancing alone, my space.

11 Comments:

At 7:20 AM, Blogger jzr said...

How very lovely and truly evocotive of quiet and being alone.

 
At 8:37 AM, Blogger paris parfait said...

Your poignant haiku are the perfect balance to that stunning photograph!

 
At 9:43 AM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

The fluffy pillows - lying back, alone, watching the clouds go by.

 
At 11:15 AM, Blogger Bedazzzled1 said...

Ohhhhh, I can tell I am going to love this blog!

Beautiful words and photos.

Yes, this is going to be a regular read of mine.

::smile::

Nikki

 
At 12:29 PM, Blogger Tammy Brierly said...

Excellent job on your haiku :) Loved the fluffy pillow clouds.

 
At 1:12 PM, Blogger Berlinbound said...

That is a terrific photograph.

 
At 2:29 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

Love that photo, so much inspiration there.

 
At 2:42 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

These are just beautiful. I love the "soft steps smile," and "dancing alone, my space."

The photo goes perfectly with these gorgeous words!

Welcome to ODB and the world of haiku!

 
At 9:01 PM, Blogger Lisa said...

that photo is incredible! thank you for sharing. :)

 
At 11:05 AM, Blogger jillypoet said...

Your words are as peaceful as your photo. I would like to have some of that peace.

 
At 6:29 PM, Blogger Jennifer S. said...

just wow, very powerful

 

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